By: Val Magnuson
State: .
Country:USA
"obsession"
Silken, flamed sensations
Arc across the sky
Shimmering kisses
Fluttering blue gauze wings
Some spirit murmuring
Bewitching alchemy
Flickering from
Some idyllic hemisphere
Exploding onto the jasmined atomosphere
In visions of dawn
Rose dreams
The angelic touch
Earth trembling
The you of you
The me of me
Illusions mirroring
Subliminal reality
The vision held
Two spirits melt
into
Obsession
Copyright © Val Magnuson 2000
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Comments: Wow, I love it, in fact I think i'm obsessed with it.
But seriously, what a poem Val. You are one of my favorite PDU artists and this piece is one of my favorites of yours. ml Doug
Name: Doug
EMail: Doug@visual.co.nz
Comments: Can I open my eyes now? Beautiful verse.
Name: phattkat
Comments: It's sort of like being inside a perfume bottle, but it's a nice job anyway.
Name: RhymeMaster
EMail: rhymer01@thewritersnook.com
Comments: Holy cow wow wow!
Name: mike howard
EMail: petfly@usol.com
Comments: Starting off with vivid concrete images,
then slipping into abstract vagueness. I can only wonder if that was intentional?
A thought provoking piece Val.
Name: Jim Magyary
EMail: magyical@aol.com
Comments: Pocas palabras, y tanto significado... Dominas el arte de exprimir el jugo a cada vocablo. Enhorabuena, amiga Val.
Name: Fermín Moreno
EMail: 3108@cai.svalero.es
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