By: Rob Walker

State: SA

Country: Australia

fog

A softfocus morning
not a frosty sharp sparkling diamonds on the lawn Hollywood
Blockbuster

More european,
scandinavian.
All hills and trees
just slightly
fuzzy at the
edges

the world shrinks
on such a day
Parameters move in.
monochrome

'on a clear day
you can see forever'
Who wants to see
forever?

i like my
cosyclaustrophobic
indistinct
grey/white
world...


Copyright © Rob Walker 2000

Send private comments to author: walker5@one.net.au


Comments: Essentially we all live in our own little worlds anyway, although those of us who are near-sighted might disagree somewhat with the point of it.
However, it appears innocuous enough on it's face, and certainly everyone has his/her own outlook on life.
Interesting point of view.

Name: RhymeMaster
EMail: rhymer01@thewritersnook.com


Comments: When I awaken to an indistinct grey/white world it usually has a hang-over attached to it. I prefer brilliant colors,
both awake and when dreaming. Nice poem.

Name: phattkat
EMail: phattkat@excite.com


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