By: phattkat


Nicole`s Room with a View
As the cool summer breeze
refreshes itself upon the earth
passing voices dance and spin
sideways along the promenade
twirling their way up to her window
passing softly through linen curtains
moving ever so slightly
in the silvery glow
of a rising moon and stars
that twinkle in a universe of delight

The sweet perfumes of lilac and lavender
gently caress her face
while music from a passing radio
in ever changing melody
chases treble and bass
evaporating in the distance
fading with the glow
of tail lights and laughter

The air is alive tonight
fresh gentle fragrances
mingle with sound and shadow
a dog barks in the distance
children play in twilight fantasy
as another summer`s evening is born

Copyright © phattkat 2000


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Comments: ummm- that's hot- I like the smell of roses and jasmin-
and how's about some supernatural from santana! VAMOS!!!
ANDALE!

Name: val magnuson
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Comments: Not poignant but piquant, it evokes things that are common to us all, but does it in a very stylish and striking manner. Nice job.

Name: RhymeMaster
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Comments: Ah! the sweet smell of summer filled with romance to sweeten the air. Such elegant language to enjoy.

Name: ZZ
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