By: Pete Spence

State: Victoria

Country: Australia


awe

winter! the stars
are out tonight

little chips
in the blackness above
where light
from the Big Bang
shines through



weeks later
an eclipse
plays Europe
and the teams
are out
looking up
in megalithic awe


Copyright © Pete Spence 2000

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Comments: I like that "light from the Big Bang" part. I never thought of stars like that. Holes in the heavens so to speak. I like this piece.

Name: Ed Allen
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Comments: Quite superb, quite perfect...ml Doug Poole

Name: doug poole
EMail: Doug@visual.co.nz



Comments: neat, sweet, short and complete!
cheers-

Name: val magnuson
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Comments: I was sure I commented on this, but it's very nice anyway.

Name: RhymeMaster
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