By: Pete Spence
State: Victoria
Country: Australia
awe
winter! the stars
are out tonight
little chips
in the blackness above
where light
from the Big Bang
shines through
weeks later
an eclipse
plays Europe
and the teams
are out
looking up
in megalithic awe
Copyright © Pete Spence 2000
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Comments: I like that "light from the Big Bang" part. I never thought of stars like that. Holes in the heavens so to speak. I like this piece.
Name: Ed Allen
EMail: eallen553@aol.com
Comments: Quite superb, quite perfect...ml Doug Poole
Name: doug poole
EMail: Doug@visual.co.nz
Comments: neat, sweet, short and complete!
cheers-
Name: val magnuson
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Comments: I was sure I commented on this, but it's very nice anyway.
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