By: James E Magyary

     By:State: S.A
     By:Country: Australia



Pop Dancer


Like the top black keys of the piano,
notes sing high with the rhythmic taps
of the retired dancer, clinking with cart.
Soft shoeing the sidewalks with coined heels, 
his steps ping to possess children
to pop out doors for this ice cream man.

With fraying brown loafers 
supporting whitish peach leotards,
the poor artist wears last clothes.
But to sugar-glazed eyes 
of pressed adoration,
he dresses as Creamsicle 
with fudgesicle shoes.

Surrounded by tiny hands pushing 
silver, mobbed by grasping glee,
this past performer remembers 
his taking of limelight, applause,
bouquets followed by deep bows.
The simple audience shows
small faces treasuring his treats,
satisfied as any crowd served 
up by his dimming memory.

After the last child scampers home,
this dancer folds up his stage, then
skips a heel click with hat tip,
spins his wagon wheels in circles,
turns the street corner in song.

Copyright © James E Magyary 2000


Send private comments to author: Magyary.Jim@ssd.loral.com




Comments: He puts the dream in dreamsicle...he`s the pop-sicle man.

Name: phattkat



Comments: Sadness is a motif here, and pain and loss,
but it is worked into the stanzas so skillfully that it doesn't overwhelm you and turn your off like a lot of similar writing does. Tres bien.

Name: RhymeMaster
EMail: rhymer01@thewritersnook.com



Comments: nice sounds in this one- but thanks no ice cream for me-

Name: val magnuson
EMail: vallmagnuson@poetsporch.com



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