Donald Somersett

     State: CA
     Country: USA

NEWTON STEWART

     
You asked me, Shay, to spin a yarn
   before your ears do chill,
so since the seas are calm tonight,
   and you seem eager still . . .

We'll count my tally, this tale be true,
   as all true stories go--
I'll tell you, friend, about a lass
   that swept clean through my soul.

I bought a sloop, the "Thompsonpass",
   and from Kinnaird's Head did sail.
For years along the Moray Firth,
   I delivered up the mail.

At the Greenman's Pub in Kelvingrove,
   that's where I met Lenore;
her father owned the tavern there
   and lands to the western shore.

Black hair, blue eyes, a winsome smile--
   no slimmer craft there be;
I drew her from father's door,
   and she sailed away with me.

At Creebridge House in Wigtownshire
   we dusted down through life;
three children raised--now grown and gone,
   along with family strife.

Fair haired Edie was the first to fly,
   her braids in Bill Durk's hands;
then Eric with his staves and hoops
   in the cooperage trade did land.

Maude, sweet Maude, our serious child
   to black Ireland's shores did flee;
a schoolmarm and a spinster still--
   no grandfather she'll make me.

Aye, we tasted from our fingertips 
   the salty Northern Sea,
but cold and damp a damned wind blew
   between my love and me.

I breathed a sigh and held her tight,
   she took a step or two,
then turned and cried--"I'll love you, Newt,
   whatever we go through!"

Lenore, my wife of thirty years
   went sickly on the vine;
she died of fever from the pox,
   and passed before her time.

So my love, like no other love,
   left me alone and free;
no, not of my own choosing,
   for changelings are but we.


Copyright © Donald Somersett 2000


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Comments: Love the language Donald.
I can envision The Kings Head pub, with a roaring fireplace, mugs of bitter, ale,
and the swarthy tale of bearded seafarer.

Name: phattkat
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Donald
Made feel I was in an English pub-- enjoy it my friend:


Comments
Sure and it's a sad story, and a bard ye truly be --
So dip yer mast and gang away across a chilly sea;
No more you'll grieve for love forlorn as twilight
shadows fall --
For soon you'll meet beyond the west in God's great
Judgement Hall.
And stiff may be your upper lip, to bite back bitter
tears
But there you'll find your last reward beyond the
failing years.

(In memory of "Writer's Block" and with thanks to
Linda Allbritten who took the time to dig this up so I
could post it.)

Thank you much,

RhymeMaster
rhymer01@thewritersnook.com



Comments: And Lenore, kind sir-
aye-nevermore-
But I really liked the poem!
val

Name: Val Magnuson
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Comments: A fine literary effort this ballad.

Name: ZZ
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Comments: Brilliant, I could smell the salt and feel the wind on my face

Name: Jo-Ann
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Comments: Congratulations Donald! What an exquisite poem.. Sad and beguiling story. Truly you deserve the accolade.. bravo!!!

Name: Patricia
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Comments: Congratulations Donald. A truely noble effort. I loved it!

Name: Ed Allen
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